Pros and Cons of Military Service
You will be working on the attached paper that already has 6 pages done, I have to add 4 more pages that are related to what I already have, but that also bring different ideas to the research paper. If it makes it easier, feel free to change any of the content that it’s already on the paper. Paper provides strong background information to understand and support the thesis, has a clear purpose, offers excellent insight into the subject, and demonstrates full awareness of the audience as serious college reader. Paper provides excellent support from a wide variety of appropriate academic sources. Paper contains ideal amounts of quoted, paraphrased and summarized material to support the thesis and build writer’s argument. The writer’s own voice is present throughout the paper, offering a sense of cohesion between the thesis and the support. Paper demonstrates clear, logical progression of ideas. Argument builds in strength. Paragraphs are focused and coherent, consisting of 7-11 sentences and clear transitions.